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PostSubject: Search + Rescue 1   Search + Rescue 1 Icon_minitimeSat Dec 18, 2010 5:48 am

Simple enough. Enjoy!

Notice: These events take place after the Covenant invasion on the Pokemon World.

Ashachu and Pikachu were running through an unknown forest, somewhere in Kanto.
"Keep running Pikachu!"
"I'm going as fast as I can Ash!"
Ashachu and Pikachu were bruised up and beaten.
"GO! GET THEM!" an unknown person said.
"WE'RE LOSING THEM!" another said.
"Ash! Call Justin!" Pikachu said as he kept running.
"I'll try!" Ash responded, clicking a button in his hat.
The scene jumps to a house in Viridian City. Inside the house, a man is sitting at a table in the dining room.
"Alright, so today's agenda is-"
Just then the phone rang. The man gets up and picks it up.
"Hello?" he answered.
"JUSTIN!"
"Who is this?" Justin asked.
"IT'S ASH! WE'RE BEING CHASED! WE NEED HELP! I HAVE NO OTHER POKEMON WITH ME BESIDES PIKACHU! I HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO GET OUT OF MY PIKACHU FORM EITHER!"
"Alright, hold off a few more minutes! I'll find your coordinates!"
"HURRY! PIKACHU! GET UP!"
"Stay on the line Ash!" Justin said, running to the garage.
He ran to the desk in there and found a device which looked like a scanner, but it was actually a call tracer. He activated it and the device began to work.
"C'mon…" Justin said to himself.
The device slowly locked on towards an area. It started to close in on a forest three kilometers north of Cerulean City.
"Alright, I got the coordinates! I'll be there in a few!" Justin said over the phone.
"HURR-!" the call abruptly ended.
"Damn it, I gotta move!"
Justin ran out of the garage towards the front door and took his car keys. A lady then walked down the stairs.
"What's going on Justin?" she asked.
"Something's going on with Ash. I got to find him!"
"Oh… I hope he's okay…"
"Only one way to find out…" he took a cube from the table where he got his car keys, then turned around and kissed the girl. "I'll be back later, I promise. I love you Angel…"
Justin ran quickly to the garage and got into his car, a black Mitsubish Evo. The garage door opened and Justin backed out of it. The car flew out of the garage. Justin put the car in drive and stormed down the street with Angel watching him roll away.
"I love you too…"
Justin turned his car down several streets over the speed limit, even passing a cop. The cop tried to get him, but lost him cause of all the turns Justin had to make. Justin soon made a turn onto a dirt road outside of Viridian and drove down it, pushing 100 MPH. The car soon reached a gate. Justin swiped a card and the gate opened. He continued down the road till he reached a military base. Justin got out of his car and took the cube and pressed it against himself. The cube then separate and started to spread around Justin's body. Red armor wrapped around his torso and arms and legs and so on. The armor was soon from neck to foot and the armor finished. A helmet was now on the car's hood. Justin took it and put it on. Justin then entered the base. Inside, many people were bustling around with papers.
"Commander!" someone said at the door. "What are you doing here?" It was Zach.
"I got an emergency to take care of. Do we have any Falcon's available?" Justin said.
"Yea, plenty!"
"Good, gear up! I'm going to need your help."
"Alright, give me a few minutes!" Zach said, going towards another room. Justin ran through the base until he got to the hangar on the other side of the base. Waiting there was a Falcon ready to fly. I ran towards it and got into the pilot's seat.
"Wait for me!"
Justin turned his head and saw a yellow armored person running towards the Falcon.
"C'mon Zach!"
Zach got into the left side gunner's seat.
"Here we go!" Justin said as he turned on the Falcon. Both propellers started and the Falcon lifted up.
"So where are we going?" Zach asked.
"To find Ash and his Pikachu… as long as they're alive…" I responded.
[View goes from 3rd to 1st- Justin]
I was worried about Ash and Pikachu. I knew them well by now and they were known to get out of tight situations… but this seemed serious. I had to find them fast. The hornet whirred across the land at over 150 MPH. We were making good ground. Within five minutes, we were over Cerulean. I turned the "chopper" north towards the forest. We flew over it for some time, maybe ten minutes scanning over and over again until Zach said:
"I got movement to the west!"
"I looked over on my left and saw two yellow figures running and several other figures behind them. They were running straight towards a cliff. We were flying away from them, so I had to turn around.
"Hold on to your helmet!" I said, turning the Falcon around.
[Back to 3rd person view]
Ash and Pikachu were still running through the forest. Ash had lost his hat, but kept running.
"Seviper, Poison Sting those brats!"
Several projectiles were shot at the two, but most of them missed. The two ran for a clearing, but came to a screeching halt as they saw the cliff drop before them.
"We're trapped!" Pikachu said.
Soon, several Pokemon surrounded them.
"Well, well, well, looking for trouble I see?"
"And making more than double…"
"Just surrender now and we won't hurt you anymore than we have."
"NEVER!" Ash yelled.
Figures appeared out of the tree line. Jessie and James.
"Your choice…" Jessie said. "Seviper, Poison Tail. Meowth, scra-"
She was cut off by a whirring noise.
"What's that?" James asked.
A Falcon lowered down from the sky.
"Permission to engage sir?" Zach asked.
"Negative." Justin responded. "Guys! Jump!"
Pikachu and Ash turned around, ready to jump.
"We won't lose them that easily! Seviper, Poison Sting!" Jessie commanded.
"Carnevine, Vine Whip!"
Pikachu and Ash jumped at the same time. The projectiles missed the two, but the Vine Whip hit Ash in the back of the head. Zach caught Pikachu, but could only watch in horror as Ash plummeted down to the water and sharp rocks below.
"AAAASSSSHHH!!!" Pikachu cried. "WE HAVE TO GET HIM!"
"I'll-" Justin began, but was cut off by a loud noise. The poisonous projectiles had hit the left side propeller and caused it to begin to fail. It was still running, but not great. "Damn it… we can't go after him now!"
"BUT WE HAVE TO FIND HIM!"
"We can't! We won't survive if we do! I'll send a rescue squad over instead! We have to go now!"
Pikachu was utterly stunned. He began to cry. Zach pulled out a can of tier gas and threw it at the Rockets, making them disoriented. Justin pulled the Falcon up somehow and limped his way back to Viridian… unable to comprehend the decision he just made…
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PostSubject: Re: Search + Rescue 1   Search + Rescue 1 Icon_minitimeSat Dec 18, 2010 5:52 am

Its good, but not enough exposition. Right away you get into the conflict not explaining anything about the characters.
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PostSubject: Re: Search + Rescue 1   Search + Rescue 1 Icon_minitimeSat Dec 18, 2010 6:00 am

Of course, it was made for my dA audience. The people who know my story better and already have an understanding of the characters. I could edit it if I wanted to for the forum, but I'm too lazy XP
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PostSubject: Re: Search + Rescue 1   Search + Rescue 1 Icon_minitimeSat Dec 18, 2010 6:05 am

I understand.
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PostSubject: Re: Search + Rescue 1   Search + Rescue 1 Icon_minitimeSat Dec 18, 2010 6:08 am

You should damn well know who Ashachu and Pikachu are lol.
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I know but I was just saying.
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